I love this story! Maybe a bit more clarification might be needed on a few parts of the story, but other then that, it is a really cool story. The other story, from Jane's point of view, is definetly going to have to be read first. That is the basis for everything that goes on in this story. I definetly hope that you write a sequel, something that covers what happens after Jane gets on board the Enterprise as an Ambassador. I would love to see a story like that, to see the reactions of every one else after she is seen on the ship!